Am4Real Posted January 28, 2007 Posted January 28, 2007 Time goes bye (by) Passing through my eyes Leaving me alone for those upside down umbrella clouds Stand by me Give it all to you I’ve gone to that place that falls from your view Forget our words Headstrong into your passing fate Bury me in that time…that place…where everything goes bye (by).
LaughMachine Posted January 28, 2007 Posted January 28, 2007 Time goes by with new memories for your eyes leaving you out of fear of those upside umbrella clouds Stand by you which we all will will give you strength from a different view Listen to the words headstrong into your inhibitions carry you out of that time, of the place where everything goes bye Well if your going to come at us with a poem, I'll just come back to you with one. Not quite sure how good it came out but it was supposed to be a good verison of yours, to brighten your eyes:) haha Good poem by the way
Author Am4Real Posted January 28, 2007 Author Posted January 28, 2007 I'll just come back to you with one. Not quite sure how good it came out but it was supposed to be a good verison of yours I'll take all the help I can get either in my writing or with my emotions. Thanks so much!!
guin_girl Posted January 28, 2007 Posted January 28, 2007 Time goes by with new memories for your eyes leaving you out of fear of those upside umbrella clouds Stand by you which we all will will give you strength from a different view Listen to the words headstrong into your inhibitions carry you out of that time, of the place where everything goes bye Well if your going to come at us with a poem, I'll just come back to you with one. Not quite sure how good it came out but it was supposed to be a good verison of yours, to brighten your eyes:) haha Good poem by the way what a creative response!!
Author Am4Real Posted January 28, 2007 Author Posted January 28, 2007 Thanks to you both...Ughhh...this is so damn hard right now.
RocketMan2 Posted January 28, 2007 Posted January 28, 2007 Hey, Hang in there it will get better. I wish I could practice what i preach, I really cant stop thinking about her Great poems by the way, I wish i could do something expressive like that Rocket
Author Am4Real Posted January 28, 2007 Author Posted January 28, 2007 I was just thinking...I've only been a part of this forum a few short weeks am so grateful to many of you for the advice, comfort and encouragement received and learned. The funny thing is every day I know more about coping and healing than I did the day before, almost to the point of perhaps knowing more about getting over a relationship than being in one (just a little humor on my part to keep myself smiling through this tough day). Thanks again everyone.
guin_girl Posted January 28, 2007 Posted January 28, 2007 The funny thing is every day I know more about coping and healing than I did the day before, almost to the point of perhaps knowing more about getting over a relationship than being in one (just a little humor on my part to keep myself smiling through this tough day). Well you are progressing better than me... I need the remedial relationship forum Sorry couldn't resist... and isn't it amazing as Rocket said, we sure can dish the advice, but seem to struggle to apply it to our own lives!
shockandawed Posted January 28, 2007 Posted January 28, 2007 Nice poem. Very expressive and creative. It is much easier to dish than follow. I am such a perfect example of that. This is a great place and I also feel a kinship with my fellow travelers on this crappy road. It's leading somewhere good, I can feel it.
Author Am4Real Posted January 28, 2007 Author Posted January 28, 2007 Sorry couldn't resist... and isn't it amazing as Rocket said, we sure can dish the advice, but seem to struggle to apply it to our own lives! Hey there! Now this made me laugh and it's so true. I think giving advice is theraputic in some strange way, and it is satisying if one can "dish" it because someone actually wants it. How does that old cliche go...? . Advice is what we ask for when we already know the answer but wish we didn't.
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