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You are in my heart, but my head says no

 

Where will this lead and how can it grow?

 

You won't let me in, you won't open up

 

Is it because I am drinking from the shared lovers cup?

 

I wonder if all these emotions make us a litte insain.

 

The way that I feel is very intense it brings me up high, then very down low, it is a sweet escape then a maddening pain.

 

 

I wish I could show you how important you are

 

You are both the best yet the worst that I have loved so far.

 

But now there is a gap between the connection with you.

 

I wish you were mine, I wish this love was true..

 

 

ok enough of that I just had to get it out... now I feel better:lmao:

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ok was the poem really that bad??? :lmao:

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P: It isn't bad, it is very beautiful and heartfelt...

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ur poem is wonderful. i wish that I could put my feelings in words as well as you :)

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It speaks how you feel.

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Very nice... almost rivals some of the poems I've written! ;)

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