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come to me and take my hand

gonna close my eyes,surrender my soul

learn me the love ,adoring ,and

how to reach up to my highest goal

 

 

hold me in your warm arms and fly

fill me with your kind kisses and love

dance on my (love tunes) and play

coz you are my angel which sent from above

 

you the one i love ,the one i adore

so ,come to me,get closer more and more

your love is inside of my core

it is lovely but also it is so sore

 

 

touch me and let me pass my love to your heart

kiss me let's our feelings through that melt

let's us always hugging each other and never be apart

let's feel something we have never felt

 

 

your warm kind lap is my soft pillow

your smooth hands wipes the grief from my face

to leave me ,i never hope that so

O allah ,please preserve to me this grace

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wrote by ezzey mohammed

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i hope u like it as im not speaking english that well

may god bless us all

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Nice poem. :)

 

Teach me to love, adore...

 

my angel sent from above...

 

let us always hug...

 

your smooth hands wipe...

 

to leave me- I hope you never would/will

 

preserve (save) this grace for me...

 

You would do much better if you could think in English. For basic knowledge, this is really cute. ;)

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your warm kind lap is my soft pillow

 

I like that line.

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recorder producer

thanks alot and may god reward you well

thanks alot a lot for your precious advices

surely gonna follow it and keep it in my mind

thanks for your being understanding and helpful

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fun 2b me

may god protect you,thanks for giving my humble simple poem from your precious time

i really appeciate that ,and also happy co you liked that line

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