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I'm expressing the past 7 months in this poem. My emotions: the heart break, the struggle, admission, acceptance, realization, the upswing, the journey, happiness.

 

 

Abandoned and afraid

Scared to death I fade

Exhausted and dejected

Anxiety to be expected

 

Only you know what you’ve done

My heart strings toyed for fun

Convinced you’re worth the fight

I went sleepless night after night

 

Lying to my face

I thought you needed space

****, I was wrong

With him now you’re strong

 

Your decision to leave

But you led me to believe

With my heart full of affection

I believed in a re-connection

 

I was too naive

Blind, she won’t deceive?

But now I see the clues

Just a firework with no fuse

 

Bawling for days

Alone with God I praised

A chance to be redeemed

This is what I always dreamed

 

Slowly I found the sun

Finally, it begun!

A path to become a man

God laid out my plan

 

Engineered to perfection

I detached no more connection

Freedom long at last

Happiness unsurpassed

 

I jostled for position

Ignited with ambition

Friends, family and new dates

My single life awaits

 

A 180 degree transition

Now I’m on a mission

Jubilant life grows on

New beginning, I’m a pawn

 

The spring of the upswing

Soon I’ll be a king

Bitterness in the past

Surprised by this contrast

 

I rose up from the dust

Like a bomb I was combust

The fire burned inside

Leaping I found my stride

 

This poem a rendition

Interpret with conviction

For I have found the way

Forever I will stay

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For the Dumpees out there that want to know what the process is like getting over somebody you truly loved and cared about.

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Awesome man! good to see a positive side on LS.

 

I like the poem, used to write my own too back in the days. Its a good vent too.

 

Keep it up and good luck.

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