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Hi all,

 

Well when my girlfriend left for no apparent reason I basically lost it! But all of a sudden I found I was writing small poems. Shortly after we split I sent her the one below but I'm afraid to say the reaction was "What are you doing". Ah well. But hey it may work for one of you guys and it was written straight from my heart out of love. If it works for someone then it has meaning and purpose.

 

Look into your heart and say i'm not the one

Look into your heart and say the love has gone

Look into your heart and feel my love for you

Look into my eyes and see I still love you

 

Good luck

 

P.S. Note for moderator - it has been posted on another website by myself - it is my poem.

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Dude I would say the same thing "What are you doing?" Although I did some cheesy stuff like that after my ex broke up with me, that was 8 years ago. I know better now. It's not even worth trying to get someone back. I doubt most girls would go for a poem as a way to get them back. Money, on the other hand, always seems to work. It's sad, really.....

 

Chris

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Hang on - it was a bit cheesy wasn't it! Oh S**t!!!!

 

Ah well looks like romance is dead! I think the most stupid thing i did for "love" was a few years ago when I flew halfway round the world as I thought someone had feelings for me - how wrong I was - she was in bed with someone else approx. 12 hours after I landed!!!! So halfway back round the world again the next day!

 

I can see the funny side now plus I did get 12000 air miles!

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Money, on the other hand, always seems to work. It's sad, really.....

 

Damn....I shoulda offered her cash to stay....

Posted

It's sad but if you said you won the lottery and can we try and work things out, they would say yes in a heartbeat.

 

Chris

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99.9999999999999999999999999999% would the other.0000000000000000000000000001 is just stupid :)

 

Chris

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