mtnbiker Posted October 8, 2012 Posted October 8, 2012 This is what I have so far. Unfortunately it seems to read "boring" to me. Looking for some recommendations for improvement. Thanks for any help! {I enjoy those who are kind and loyal. I am an educated guy who very much appreciates an intelligent woman. I'm always learning more about myself and life each day. Adventure sports such as mountain biking, hiking, kayaking and anything else outdoors and preferably on or in water are some of my passions and serve me well in unwinding from a long week. I also love to run. I am a fairly talented cook as well. I am attracted to someone who tries to enjoy everyday of their life and wants to share hers' with me and take part in mine. Someone who likes to move outside of their comfort zone and try new things sometimes. A woman who knows who they are and what they want, including in relationships, is attractive. I am looking for something sincere and genuine. If you love the beach, dogs and the Phillies all the better. Say hello if interested and we'll go from there.}
FitChick Posted October 8, 2012 Posted October 8, 2012 I've had some women plagiarize some of the best lines from my profile and it pissed me off royally.
Author mtnbiker Posted October 8, 2012 Author Posted October 8, 2012 I would think so, you put yourself out there and then somebody rips of your creative currency. I have looked at a few profiles of educated guy in my age range and it amazes me that they have spelling errors and talk about how they love bars. Most people like a little social drinking and fun, but they seem to be coming across as party animals still. BUT, perhaps this is why my profile reads a little boring? I made a few tweaks and this is what I have now. Still would love some recommendations. {I am always learning more about myself and life each day. I am an educated guy who very much appreciates an intelligent woman. I am finishing school after over eight years of being a mason. I will be working in pediaric occupational therapy after graduation. Mountain biking, hiking, kayaking and anything else outdoors and preferably on or in water are some of my passions and serve me well in unwinding from a long week. I also enjoy the freedom, fresh air and scenery that come with being a runner. I am a fairly talented cook. I am attracted to someone who tries to enjoy everyday of their life and wants to share hers' with me and take part in mine. Someone who likes to move outside of their comfort zone and try new things sometimes. A woman who knows who they are and what they want, including in relationships, is attractive. I am looking for something sincere and genuine. I enjoy those who are kind, loyal and readily able to laugh at themselves. If you love the beach, dogs and the Phillies all the better. A few common interests are always good. Say hello if interested and we'll go from there.}
NateC Posted October 8, 2012 Posted October 8, 2012 Honestly dude the profile summary doesn't mean all that much. If she likes how you look, she'll respond. If she doesn't, she won't. It's really all it comes down to. Quoted for truth. I've probably had 100+ views in 2 days on zoosk and not a single one initiated a conversation. And I have a decent profile written compared to a lot of ones I see...
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