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Even after 2 years, I still feel really guilty. What does that mean?

Edited by desertsessions
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My first language is not english, but i'll try :

 

Hi,

This may seem out of left-field, but I was an utter jerk when you asked for your stuff last year.

I sent it in the mail earlier today, along with a money order, that will cover that $30 I owed you. The extra on the money order is for when Lucy decided to eat your hair curler for lunch. In hindsight, I really should have paid for it when it happened. I really acted pretty lousy most of the time.

I’m mortified I lied to you. It was an incredibly selfish thing to do, and i really had no excuse for it.

You did nothing wrong, you were awfully good to me. I was an apprehensive mess back in the day, who never really slowed down to just enjoy life. It was all quite silly, and unnecessary.

I should have kept my composure, you had a lot on your shoulders with school, and dealing with my flack didn’t help at all.

This is not a cry for attention, i don't want us to be friends so i can get back into your life, i hope this mail finds you in a better place. I just thought you may appreciate your long overdue stuff back.

Take care.

 

 

Modifications :

- i can't believe i lied to you, especially over such a frivolous reason ---- it might lead one to believe that lying should be saved for a better reason or; it will piss her off if she cared about the lying.

- You never did anything wrong, even though you may have felt inadequate at times, or as if there were double standards in play --- everything after eve and or basically cancels the first part. Better to remove them.

- I missed a lot of simple things along the way, not to mention acted pretty lousy mostly.--- changed to I really acted pretty lousy most of the time.

 

Basically i added some PC and made the mail more about being sorry for what you did to her instead of what happened with you.

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