Jabez Posted August 22, 2010 Posted August 22, 2010 I posted this in the "Post Here Instead of Contacting Your Ex" thread bt I just wanted to post it in it's own thread. Haven't thought up a title yet, but I'll be recording this song soon (my friends recently got me into writing rap lyrics..it's actually a very creative venting method) so I thought I might get reviews on the lyrics. It's not finished, my bro is supposed to write the last verse but the first two and the chorus are mine, so... I'm sick n tired of the pain / everyday / I struggle to restrain / thoughts of loneliness, anger / depression n disdain / but I can't / not again / what the **** is you playin / at, toyin with my emotions / infecting my brain / my boys try to console me / they say "homie forget that dame" / but it's too late / you've murdered me / can't put it no other way / six feet under / no wonder / it should be easy to see / why the **** I'm writin these words / maybe now you'll listen to me // I just wanted to be with you / but now I just wanna forget you / I try to drown you out with alcohol / but it ain't that simple / cuz when I wake up hung over / I realize that I'm not over / you, the **** am I supposed to do? / how am I gonna get past you // I've careened off the brige / n now I've hit rock bottom / cappin off every lonely night / with a bottle of Ketel 1 vodka / my bros tell me to get out there / but I can only sit back n wallow / I won't lie, it's crossed my mind / to down that ****in pill bottle / you think it's easy for me to find someone like you / find someone as beautiful who'll listen to your problems too? / it's not, believe me, I know from my own experience / to find a girl like you / the odds are one in ten billion / when I stumbled onto you / I realized what I been needin / but since you ****in dropped me / my heart hasn't stopped bleedin / I feel empty and hollow / I no longer believe in love / n the only thing I can do now is pick the vodka bottle up / bottoms up // I just wanted to be with you / but now I just wanna forget you / I try to drown you out with alcohol / but it ain't that simple / cuz when I wake up hung over / I realize that I'm not over / you, the **** am I supposed to do? / how am I gonna get past you //
Username37 Posted August 22, 2010 Posted August 22, 2010 Pretty good man. Call your rap "Coping" or the name of your ex. I've been writing some stuff too. Not rap. Just some acoustic ****. I should get recordin!
Author Jabez Posted August 22, 2010 Author Posted August 22, 2010 Bro.."Coping"....I ****in love it!!! Haha
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