earthfireuk Posted August 4, 2010 Posted August 4, 2010 (edited) Its probably not very good but just wanted to get some of my feelings out. Abstract thoughts and tarnished sounds Emotions cut through empty crowds Outside my shell Nothing remains I’m viewing life through varnished pains Blinded by sheer beauty Then deprived of its light You once gave me your love Now have taken my sight Dreams and reality synthesized Now disconnected Screams of finality mesmerize A soul once complete Lies Rejected Edited August 4, 2010 by earthfireuk
Sophia8 Posted August 4, 2010 Posted August 4, 2010 Abstract thoughts and tarnished sounds Emotions cut through empty crowds Outside my shell Nothing remains I’m viewing life through varnished pains I especially like this part, brings back a couple of memories.
bonpaw2008 Posted August 4, 2010 Posted August 4, 2010 This is really nice Earth, I like the 2nd verse the best
Author earthfireuk Posted January 8, 2011 Author Posted January 8, 2011 Haha, just read this again. Thanks for your responses... wow I sure was in a bad place back then. Funny how things change
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