VUndergound1994 Posted March 2, 2010 Posted March 2, 2010 I had to write a love poem for my English homework, and well, what do you think? Btw, her name's Rose, thats why there so many references to flowers lol. The moon and stars that shine, Still shine shy of her Eyes, As rich in value, As rich in character, Equal the shine of uneven diamonds. The beauties of uniform green hills, All but level her silk Hair, The sweet scent, That is nothing but the Attar, Of her every Breath. Her prominent but delicate, Figure does follow the wind, And illuminate her presence and beauty, In the flicker of a candle. The flow of her Thoughts drift, Across every corner of the mind, Which are overwhelmed, Through the open door, her Grin. The calm of a Summer breeze, Her engulfing Voice, But the tempest that is a storm, Nothing but her innocent, Inquisitive subconscious Logic. All of these are, A fraction of her worth, Admired and sensitive, As England’s former Rose, Upright that she is, Survives the winds of the winters. As her pure red Petals, Fall to her deep-Rooted heart. A fraction only, For I long to pick these fallen Petals, And I long to Prune the Thorn less; Rose. If your wondering why there's so many capital letters, its because all the references to her and an actual rose are capitalized. I guess I wanted to emphasize how I felt about her???
LynnM28 Posted March 2, 2010 Posted March 2, 2010 Anyone would be flattered to have something so lovely written for them :-)
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