InspiredbyYou Posted December 8, 2009 Posted December 8, 2009 Judging by what you are looking for, I'd say you need to email a girl with a little more depth. Someone who is actually going to engage you a little and who you can also engage, you seem to be more in in touch with your emotional side and it would seem you need a girl who in turn is a little more in tune with herself. That chick you emailed, quite frankly sounds like a twit. Sorry. She is very cute but did you read her profile? It's LAME! try her: http://www.plentyoffish.com/member7631351.htm ok go ahead bite my head off...hahahaha
dudet Posted December 8, 2009 Posted December 8, 2009 I can and have gotten guys who I consider to be higher caliber. I am not in the least bit intimidated by somebody who writes like a fifteen-year-old. too funny. i don't even need to turn on comedy central tonight
Author Lost-n-confused Posted December 8, 2009 Author Posted December 8, 2009 I can and have gotten guys who I consider to be higher caliber. I am not in the least bit intimidated by somebody who writes like a fifteen-year-old. My writing is not that bad. I'm offended. I even had my mom proof read my profile. Calling my hair gay! WTF the fohawk is an extremely popular hair cut right now. Who the hell are you anyways. The grammar police. Hair Nazi!
dreamergrl Posted December 8, 2009 Posted December 8, 2009 Geeze.. I keep looking at all these profiles and forget that people on POF can see that my profile looked at theirs.
thegreatmoose Posted December 8, 2009 Posted December 8, 2009 Judging by what you are looking for, I'd say you need to email a girl with a little more depth. Someone who is actually going to engage you a little and who you can also engage, you seem to be more in in touch with your emotional side and it would seem you need a girl who in turn is a little more in tune with herself. That chick you emailed, quite frankly sounds like a twit. Sorry. She is very cute but did you read her profile? It's LAME! try her: http://www.plentyoffish.com/member7631351.htm ok go ahead bite my head off...hahahaha I love the last paragraph! Definitely very original.
Yukikazi Posted December 8, 2009 Posted December 8, 2009 My writing is not that bad. I'm offended. I even had my mom proof read my profile. Calling my hair gay! WTF the fohawk is an extremely popular hair cut right now. Who the hell are you anyways. The grammar police. Hair Nazi! hahaha.. now this is comedy
Yukikazi Posted December 8, 2009 Posted December 8, 2009 Geeze.. I keep looking at all these profiles and forget that people on POF can see that my profile looked at theirs. You can go into mail settings and turn that off... just an fyi
CLC2008 Posted December 8, 2009 Posted December 8, 2009 My writing is not that bad. I'm offended. I even had my mom proof read my profile. Calling my hair gay! WTF the fohawk is an extremely popular hair cut right now. Who the hell are you anyways. The grammar police. Hair Nazi! Oh that should def be the headline. Too funny.
Author Lost-n-confused Posted December 8, 2009 Author Posted December 8, 2009 I'm going out for a bit.. any notice I posted about having a blind date friday?
dudet Posted December 8, 2009 Posted December 8, 2009 My writing is not that bad. I'm offended. I even had my mom proof read my profile. Calling my hair gay! WTF the fohawk is an extremely popular hair cut right now. Who the hell are you anyways. The grammar police. Hair Nazi! LOL i think he's joking. must be pretty confident to take in all the harassment though
Yukikazi Posted December 8, 2009 Posted December 8, 2009 Judging by what you are looking for, I'd say you need to email a girl with a little more depth. Someone who is actually going to engage you a little and who you can also engage, you seem to be more in in touch with your emotional side and it would seem you need a girl who in turn is a little more in tune with herself. That chick you emailed, quite frankly sounds like a twit. Sorry. She is very cute but did you read her profile? It's LAME! try her: http://www.plentyoffish.com/member7631351.htm ok go ahead bite my head off...hahahaha That girl seems to have her head on straight and knows what she wants.. very nice.. cute too.. If she were in my age range and local.. I'd go for her...
InspiredbyYou Posted December 8, 2009 Posted December 8, 2009 Geeze.. I keep looking at all these profiles and forget that people on POF can see that my profile looked at theirs. Are you logged in looking at them? Just look as a guess, that's how we are doing it. Also you can turn off who you view while you are logged in.
D-Lish Posted December 8, 2009 Posted December 8, 2009 My writing is not that bad. I'm offended. I even had my mom proof read my profile. Calling my hair gay! WTF the fohawk is an extremely popular hair cut right now. Who the hell are you anyways. The grammar police. Hair Nazi! Your mom? That's awesome. So she can't put sentences together either I guess? hahaha.. now this is comedy At it's best! How much you want to bet Dudet and L&C are the same troll?
dudet Posted December 8, 2009 Posted December 8, 2009 Your mom? That's awesome. So she can't put sentences together either I guess? At it's best! How much you want to bet Dudet and L&C are the same troll? because i'm giving him a little slack, now you think i'm a clone of him...twisted. get your facts straight
Yukikazi Posted December 8, 2009 Posted December 8, 2009 Dudet.. the guy is over 20 and has built in spell checkers.. there is no excuse for misspelling except for laziness. D-Lish high comedy.. I'm skiping colbert for this Post faster ppl... its almost bed time and I need more funnies..
thegreatmoose Posted December 8, 2009 Posted December 8, 2009 I said I changed it... http://www.plentyoffish.com/member16316312.htm It's a lot better than before, but there are still things that aren't complete sentences. Parts of it still seem awkward such as the sentence about going to the gym. It seems to me that you often use more words than necessary to phrase things. Writing these things about yourself is hard work and allow a number of days before you get the wording exactly the way you want it. Once you get all the major mistakes out, show it to someone with an English degree or at least someone who is very good at writing. They can often find things that most people miss.
BobSacamento Posted December 8, 2009 Posted December 8, 2009 I really can't think of anything more petty than spelling and grammar.
SadandConfusedWA Posted December 8, 2009 Posted December 8, 2009 This dude has the strangest mix of arrogance and desperation going on at the same time. Weird.....
dudet Posted December 8, 2009 Posted December 8, 2009 I just edited his essay for him. well I think it sounds a little better at least. here you go: Hi my name is Victor. I'm a very outgoing, laid back individual. I enjoy anything from going out on the town to an exhilarating outdoor adventure. I enjoy having a romantic, quiet evening at home. My aspiration in life is to become a professional pilot, and I am currently working on my flight instructor rating. I am looking for someone who I can have a great time sharing my adventures with. I would love to have a partner who enjoys going to the gym with me. Working out as a couple is awesome! I'd like to meet someone who isn't afraid to try new activities. Would prefer her to not be too timid nor afraid to speak up. So, if you are a girl who isn't afraid of a fast paced adventurous lifestyle, please send me a message!
dreamergrl Posted December 8, 2009 Posted December 8, 2009 What did I miss? I've been busy chatting it up with a guy from POF.
InspiredbyYou Posted December 8, 2009 Posted December 8, 2009 What did I miss? I've been busy chatting it up with a guy from POF. Nothing, more of the same. Do we have a home run? I'm rooting for ya!
dudet Posted December 8, 2009 Posted December 8, 2009 What did I miss? I've been busy chatting it up with a guy from POF. well you missed that Shadowplay had my post flagged, because i defended the OP when she said he looked like a queer
dreamergrl Posted December 8, 2009 Posted December 8, 2009 Nothing, more of the same. Do we have a home run? I'm rooting for ya! Not to thread jack, but I think we might be going out for a date. We'll see.
Yukikazi Posted December 8, 2009 Posted December 8, 2009 Not to thread jack, but I think we might be going out for a date. We'll see. Good job
Author Lost-n-confused Posted December 8, 2009 Author Posted December 8, 2009 I just edited his essay for him. well I think it sounds a little better at least. here you go: Hi my name is Victor. I'm a very outgoing, laid back individual. I enjoy anything from going out on the town to an exhilarating outdoor adventure. I enjoy having a romantic, quiet evening at home. My aspiration in life is to become a professional pilot, and I am currently working on my flight instructor rating. I am looking for someone who I can have a great time sharing my adventures with. I would love to have a partner who enjoys going to the gym with me. Working out as a couple is awesome! I'd like to meet someone who isn't afraid to try new activities. Would prefer her to not be too timid nor afraid to speak up. So, if you are a girl who isn't afraid of a fast paced adventurous lifestyle, please send me a message! Thanks, ill use your edit.
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