NINEBREAKER Posted April 15, 2009 Posted April 15, 2009 well i was doing my english final wich was a poetry book. you had to write poetry and it had to be wrote well. so i wound up being on a poem that had to be wrote by describing a set area time place feel scent and taste thing. after thinking for awhile i couldn't get anything in my head. so i put in my ear buds and listened to music. after listening to a favorite song of mine i had a flashback that made it perfect. so i begin writing and i wind up not finishing it in class. i spend the whole day trying to get it right. so when i finish i hand it to the teacher and her jaw dropped. "MARTY!!," she screams. awestruck by me having the nerve to write about in school. i got all the points for that part and was let off the hook only because it was wrote well. now folks please share some of your own poetry in this thread thats the point of me makeing it. also explain your poems if needed My rose colored saturday lying under a rose red moon the scent of mint on her breath her cherry lips thrust upon me the moon growing ever redder her warm body upon mine, her arching back , her silky skin rubbing agaist mine her body twisting & thrashing about in ecstasy she moans the moon growing an ever deeper shade of red our bodies rustling about even so we continue the sin our bodies trash about in ecstasy by the end of this rose red a new self begins
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