romanticgator Posted February 4, 2009 Posted February 4, 2009 Never done this before but just looking for feedback on a letter I've drafted for my gf whom I care deeply about... -- You are one of the most special people I have ever met and I can hardly begin to express the amount of happiness you have brought to my life. I am in absolute awe of how you can be so beautiful yet adorably cute, all at the same time; essentially why I cannot bare to ever look away from you. Even more, the exceptionally thoughtful and selfless actions you so casually practice on a day-to-day basis are just a few of your countless endearing qualities which I completely admire. I want to sincerely thank you for being such a wonderful part of my life and tell you that I am truly grateful for every minute we spend together. My dreams are filled with excitement from the thought of what great things our future will hold. -- Just a simple note to let her know how much I care for V-day. Good and bad feedback is more than welcome. Thanks.
openbook08 Posted February 4, 2009 Posted February 4, 2009 i love it!! i hope you guys have a fantastic val's day and that your relationship brings you BOTH lots of happiness. good job ps have you a brother?!!
Geishawhelk Posted February 4, 2009 Posted February 4, 2009 Never done this before but just looking for feedback on a letter I've drafted for my gf whom I care deeply about... -- You are one of the most special people I have ever met and I can hardly begin to express the amount of happiness you have brought to my life. I am in absolute awe of how you can be so beautiful yet adorably cute, all at the same time; essentially why I cannot BEAR to ever look away from you. Even more, the exceptionally thoughtful and selfless actions you so casually practiSe on a day-to-day basis are just a few of your countless endearing qualities which I completely admire. I want to sincerely thank you for being such a wonderful part of my life and tell you that I am truly grateful for every minute we spend together. My dreams are filled with excitement from the thought of what great things our future will hold. -- Just a simple note to let her know how much I care for V-day. Good and bad feedback is more than welcome. Thanks. Please don't jump on me, and it's not intended as a condescending put down, but I corrected two spelling anomalies..... In Bold/caps, above. The note is lovely. I wouldn't mind a note like that myself. Nice one.
SoulSearch_CO Posted February 5, 2009 Posted February 5, 2009 Very sweet note. I'd love to receive something like that.
Author romanticgator Posted February 5, 2009 Author Posted February 5, 2009 Thanks for the feedback and spelling corrections... I'm terrible with spelling/grammar so any help is appreciated.
Lucky_One Posted February 5, 2009 Posted February 5, 2009 "You are one of the most....." I dunno. I sort of like hearing that I am THE.....rather than ONE of the...... But then again, you don't want to exaggerate or tell a white whopper, so it is a fine line. No advice, it was just my gut instinct. All in all, after spelling/grammar corrections, it is one of the sweetest things I have ever read! (Notice, not THE sweetest thing, but ONE of the!!)
Author romanticgator Posted February 5, 2009 Author Posted February 5, 2009 Well... I have not been dating this girl for a very long time but long enough to know i'm head over heals for her. So the "one of the most" was intended to not make the entire note overkill...
Meaplus3 Posted February 5, 2009 Posted February 5, 2009 That's very sweet. I would cry happy tears() if I received that note. Mea:)
serialgf Posted February 5, 2009 Posted February 5, 2009 in American english "practice" is perfectly acceptable and more commonly used... practise makes you sound british the note is beautiful...
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