i wrote a poem for my ex who i still love and has left me for someone else

[sunnyjohal]

hey well i had a break up with my ex girlfriend and was trying to go NC but broke it a few times so kept a diary what ever i wanted to talk to her i would write in that diary and ended up writing something which i wont call poetry because i know i am not even close of being a poet but i thought it was pretty neat for someone like me and so true for someone who had a breakup like me :love:i am sorry if i posted in wrong section here it goes

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My beloveds eyes still shine like a mirror

but someone else looks at his face in that mirror.

 

Her demands are same but are fulfilled by someone else

Roads are also the same but are travelled with someone else

 

By gods grace her face still looks like the rising sun

but the light is for someone else

 

My beloveds eyes still shine like a mirror,

but someone else looks at his face in that mirror

 

Making big plans at this tender age was my mistake

Having high hopes on someone so weak was my mistake

 

It was a mistake that i thought kisses are contracts

It was a mistake that i forgot the terms and the facts

 

My beloveds eyes still shine like a mirror

But someone else looks at his face in that mirror

 

Her heart is still same but it cares for someone else

Things she used to say are also same but are about someone else

 

I am not surprised that she changed

But i just look at how time has changed for me

 

My beloveds eyes still shine like a mirror

But someone else looks at his face in that mirror.

 

 

 

 

just let me know if someone liked it i know its not that good too but at least my diary helps me take out my emotions without messing things up and without pushing her away more.

[TogetherForever]

hey well i had a break up with my ex girlfriend and was trying to go NC but broke it a few times so kept a diary what ever i wanted to talk to her i would write in that diary and ended up writing something which i wont call poetry because i know i am not even close of being a poet but i thought it was pretty neat for someone like me and so true for someone who had a breakup like me :love:i am sorry if i posted in wrong section here it goes

:-

 

My beloveds eyes still shine like a mirror

but someone else looks at his face in that mirror.

 

Her demands are same but are fulfilled by someone else

Roads are also the same but are travelled with someone else

 

By gods grace her face still looks like the rising sun

but the light is for someone else

 

My beloveds eyes still shine like a mirror,

but someone else looks at his face in that mirror

 

Making big plans at this tender age was my mistake

Having high hopes on someone so weak was my mistake

 

It was a mistake that i thought kisses are contracts

It was a mistake that i forgot the terms and the facts

 

My beloveds eyes still shine like a mirror

But someone else looks at his face in that mirror

 

Her heart is still same but it cares for someone else

Things she used to say are also same but are about someone else

 

I am not surprised that she changed

But i just look at how time has changed for me

 

My beloveds eyes still shine like a mirror

But someone else looks at his face in that mirror.

 

 

 

 

just let me know if someone liked it i know its not that good too but at least my diary helps me take out my emotions without messing things up and without pushing her away more.

 

 

((((((((sunnyjohal)))))))))))

Very nice poem by the way.

TF

[mystic_pizza]

Beautiful.

[JosieMcCoy]

Pretty good!

I wish it rhymed!

But good!

 

Cheers!

[sunnyjohal]

yeah i wish too that it rhymed but thats why i say i am not even close to a poet this just what i felt and just wrote it and posted it here

[MakeLemonade]

It doesn't have to rhyme to be poetry! It is so honest and full of emotion. I think it's great! I hope it helps you heal your wounds and move on with your life.

[JosieMcCoy]

Yeah, but when it rhymes you know someone is really trying