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Just wrote this after another fall, and learning more.

 

 

 

Destroyed you took my beauty away,

I was once beautiful in everyway.

Now they can see my sadness lie,

they can see it loom from behind my eyes.

it shocked me to hear i wasnt hiding it well,

covering up how i feel from when i first fell.

in a way i asked for this, i needed more strength,

i was given a chance to find it through the years length.

you wrote me letter how you were sorry,

but i now i see that its about you not me. (thanks funkybaseplayer ;))

you were guilty so you released it by apologising,

but instead i was affended,was insult to the injury.

i wish i could forget you and how we once were,

how the connection pulled me totally under.

you destroyed my gentle heart and gave it knives to endure,

i cant wait for the day to forgive you and be beautiful once more.

 

Jmina

Posted

a lovely poem :)

 

it helps doesnt it? i post poems on here sometimes too, i find writing about things very helpful emotionally because it forces you to dig deep and pull it all to the surface and pour it out and you can feel everything you've been avoiding...makes you deal with it right there and then. Im not saying it all instantly goes away, but it opens that door. I find i write tonnes of poems all on the same incident or subject till its all out then just close the book on it literatly...and its all in there and not in me. Keep going, you've got talent :)

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Writing is awesome! I've only discovered this really, after writing a journal and then also writing on here. I suddenly noticed that how I was feeling about things would change. So, I've started a blog too - you can never write too much :)

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thanks guys! =)

 

i love writing too. always have and wont stop.

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