Tell me what you think..
There is a place where we walk called the 'city of lights'. Its like a park that is all lit up. Well, there is this bridge we've walked across a few times that has lights and cars can't drive on. So on v-tines day I was going to ask her to take a walk with me, and half way across the bridge I'll tell her how much she means to me, how much I love her & how I dream of the day that we are both grey haired and sitting on our porch reminising about all the great times we had together. Then after telling her this, I'll say 'I have something for you.. A poem I made' and then read it.. Here is what it says:
You are my heartbeat and my strength.
You are an angel sent from above
You are the only true love I know.
And you will always be my love
You saved me from all my heartache,
You wiped away my tears.
You kissed away the bad dreams
And blew away my fears.
Sometimes I wonder what I did to deserve you.
To know you is to know a mystery.
To hold you, my one true wish.
And to kiss your lips so softly
Others can't understand it,
How we fell so fast.
Showing all the people,
That our love overcomes our past.
So now it comes time,
To prove this love so true.
Test after test, we show others
That we're stronger together,
Stronger than we ever knew.
You are my other half,
The missing link of me.
You complete my soul,
Like no other can ever be.
YOU are what true love is
And I know this is meant to be
So I take your hand and bow on knee
Will you marry me?
During the last part i'll get on my knee & show her the ring. What do you all think? I already got her dad's blessing, and welcomed me to the family last night
That meant alot to me.
......good luck!!!
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