LoveShack.org Community Forums

Reload this Page LoveShack.org Community Forums > General > General Relationship Discussion

Something for the Poets.

Register Community Guidelines FAQ Journals Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

General Relationship Discussion Everything else under the sun. Not sure where to post? This is the place!

Old 26th May 2008, 5:06 AM   #1
Taramere
Established Member
 
Taramere's Avatar
 
Join Date: Feb 2008
Posts: 845
Quote:
Originally Posted by Storyrider View Post
Yes, I hate it too.
If this is the missing link
I hope it stays lost.
It's like Ross from Friends.
With a doughnut for a nose.
And a bad hair cut.
Taramere is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 26th May 2008, 8:16 AM   #2
marlena
Established Member
 
marlena's Avatar
 
Join Date: Dec 2006
Posts: 3,302
And indeed there will be time
To wonder, “Do I dare?” and, “Do I dare?”
Time to turn back and descend the stair,
With a bald spot in the middle of my hair
[They will say: “How his hair is growing thin!”]
My morning coat, my collar mounting firmly to the chin,
My necktie rich and modest, but asserted by a simple pin
[They will say: “But how his arms and legs are thin!”]
Do I dare
Disturb the universe?
In a minute there is time
For decisions and revisions which a minute will reverse.

From Eliot's The Love Song of J. Alfed Prufrock, a favourite of mine
__________________
I do not agree with what you have to say, but I'll defend to the death your right to say it.
Voltaire

Last edited by marlena; 26th May 2008 at 8:22 AM.
marlena is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 26th May 2008, 9:37 AM   #3
LikeTheWolf
Established Member
 
LikeTheWolf's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2008
Posts: 190
let me bite your neck
i promise i won't leave a mark
but she moved my head away
and pushed down on my shoulders instead

- LTW

o
LikeTheWolf is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 26th May 2008, 12:40 PM   #4
Storyrider
Established Member
 
Storyrider's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: amidst the ponies
Posts: 7,474
Quote:
Originally Posted by marlena View Post
And indeed there will be time
To wonder, “Do I dare?” and, “Do I dare?”
Time to turn back and descend the stair,
With a bald spot in the middle of my hair
[They will say: “How his hair is growing thin!”]
My morning coat, my collar mounting firmly to the chin,
My necktie rich and modest, but asserted by a simple pin
[They will say: “But how his arms and legs are thin!”]
Do I dare
Disturb the universe?
In a minute there is time
For decisions and revisions which a minute will reverse.

From Eliot's The Love Song of J. Alfed Prufrock, a favourite of mine
"I grow old. I grow old. Shall I wear the bottoms of my trousers rolled?"

I like this one too, Marlena.
Storyrider is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 26th May 2008, 11:12 PM   #5
LikeTheWolf
Established Member
 
LikeTheWolf's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2008
Posts: 190
She brushes her hair back
but
I brush it back further
exposing her to the air
she whispers 'Ok'
and before we determine what she meant
i am tasting her glistening skin

- LTW

r
LikeTheWolf is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 27th May 2008, 6:46 PM   #6
LikeTheWolf
Established Member
 
LikeTheWolf's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2008
Posts: 190
the rain drops battering on the glass
is our music
of the night
protected in this vehicle
i move your body closet to me
not because i need warmth
i just want to feel your heat
and whisper 'decadence'

-ltw

Y
LikeTheWolf is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 27th May 2008, 6:52 PM   #7
Storyrider
Established Member
 
Storyrider's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: amidst the ponies
Posts: 7,474
Quote:
Originally Posted by LikeTheWolf View Post
body closet
I need to get caught up on my sexual terminology.
Storyrider is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 27th May 2008, 7:06 PM   #8
Nemo
Established Member
 
Nemo's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jun 2007
Posts: 4,603
Quote:
Originally Posted by Storyrider View Post
I need to get caught up on my sexual terminology.


I think my body's out of the closet, but I can't be sure.
Nemo is online now   Reply With Quote
Old 27th May 2008, 7:10 PM   #9
Storyrider
Established Member
 
Storyrider's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: amidst the ponies
Posts: 7,474
Quote:
Originally Posted by Nemo View Post


I think my body's out of the closet, but I can't be sure.
Actually, I think the poem is the better for that image. A very surprising, evocative juxtaposition, perhaps indicative of emptiness, or a particularly large uterus.
Storyrider is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 27th May 2008, 7:32 PM   #10
Nemo
Established Member
 
Nemo's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jun 2007
Posts: 4,603
Quote:
Originally Posted by Storyrider View Post
Actually, I think the poem is the better for that image. A very surprising, evocative juxtaposition, perhaps indicative of emptiness, or a particularly large uterus.
That's beautiful.

I hope I have a body closet. I am searching for the knob right now. I will keep you informed on any developments.
Nemo is online now   Reply With Quote
Old 27th May 2008, 7:36 PM   #11
Storyrider
Established Member
 
Storyrider's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: amidst the ponies
Posts: 7,474
Quote:
Originally Posted by Nemo View Post
That's beautiful.

I hope I have a body closet. I am searching for the knob right now. I will keep you informed on any developments.
Let me know if you need any help.
Storyrider is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 27th May 2008, 9:36 PM   #12
LikeTheWolf
Established Member
 
LikeTheWolf's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2008
Posts: 190
Ode To Body Closet

Oh Body Closet
How beautiful you are
When I need to rid myself of a smart ass
you are not very far

i take you out of storage
when someone becomes too much
and show you off to the loud mouth
while saying "Look, but don't touch!"

for I open your lid
and ask if they would be so kind
to lean over and look inside you
and then push them on their behind

And when they fall in
I lock you up tight
and then i hear the muffled screams
all through the night

oh yes my body closet
you are so wonderful to me
while some think you are a typo
you are as real to me as can be

-LTW

o
LikeTheWolf is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 27th May 2008, 9:38 PM   #13
Storyrider
Established Member
 
Storyrider's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: amidst the ponies
Posts: 7,474


Bravo, LTW!!!!!!

I love it.
Storyrider is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 27th May 2008, 9:42 PM   #14
Trialbyfire
Established Member
 
Trialbyfire's Avatar
 
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: Here!
Posts: 22,730
Journal Entries: 2
That's so wrong but so right!
__________________
Think, think, think... -Winnie the Pooh
Trialbyfire is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 28th May 2008, 11:56 PM   #15
LikeTheWolf
Established Member
 
LikeTheWolf's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2008
Posts: 190
Come red riding hood
a woman, not little at all
I caught you alone in the forest
feel your burning. heed your call

Come Red riding hood
encompass your red over me
your cloak, your lips, and whatever else
enslaves myself, unable to flee

Come red Riding hood
send those swinging hips my way
teach me to ride, live up to your name
hoist your body, swoon and sway

Come red riding Hood
draw back your hooded cover
reveal those eyes, your glistening hair
i'll expose the other

Cum Red Riding Hood

Come



-LTW

u
LikeTheWolf is offline   Reply With Quote
Reply

Bookmarks

Thread Tools
Display Modes

 
Forum Jump

 

All times are GMT -4. The time now is 3:46 PM.

Please note: The suggestions and advice offered on this web site are opinions only and are not to be used in the place of professional psychological counseling or medical advice. If you or someone close to you is currently in crisis or in an emergency situation, contact your local law enforcement agency or emergency number.


Copyright © 1997-2008 LoveShack.org. All Rights Reserved.