Phoenician Posted April 12, 2016 Share Posted April 12, 2016 just venting sorry , "May be if we had words to share we would have talked May be if we had a dream , We would have slept May be if we had tears , we would have cried ...If we had beliefs , we would have prayed ...If we had stories to tell , we we have red .. If there was a road leading slowly , we would have walked May be there is a moon ,trees or wooden bridge May be there are too much people blocking the way May be there is a way that we never see... " 4 Link to post Share on other sites
BetheButterfly Posted April 14, 2016 Share Posted April 14, 2016 That is beautiful! I'm crying; it touched my heart. Who wrote it? Blessings 2 Link to post Share on other sites
Author Phoenician Posted April 14, 2016 Author Share Posted April 14, 2016 i wrote it while crying ... Link to post Share on other sites
ShatteredLady Posted April 14, 2016 Share Posted April 14, 2016 Who's your inspiration? Your wife? It's lovely. Do you often write poetry? Link to post Share on other sites
Author Phoenician Posted April 15, 2016 Author Share Posted April 15, 2016 Thanks , My wife inspires me ... I wish she never did . Link to post Share on other sites
BetheButterfly Posted April 15, 2016 Share Posted April 15, 2016 i wrote it while crying ... I am sorry. It is very beautiful though. You have a gift in painting a picture with words. Link to post Share on other sites
Author Phoenician Posted April 15, 2016 Author Share Posted April 15, 2016 thanks, it is amazing that beautiful things sometimes come from pain . 1 Link to post Share on other sites
BetheButterfly Posted April 18, 2016 Share Posted April 18, 2016 thanks, it is amazing that beautiful things sometimes come from pain . It is amazing. I'm so sorry for your pain. Can I edit your poem, add "by Phoenician", and put it on my fridge? It is so beautiful and a very good reminder to enjoy life and cultivate relationships. God bless you and I pray He helps you in the trials you are undergoing. 1 Link to post Share on other sites
Author Phoenician Posted April 19, 2016 Author Share Posted April 19, 2016 It is amazing. I'm so sorry for your pain. Can I edit your poem, add "by Phoenician", and put it on my fridge? It is so beautiful and a very good reminder to enjoy life and cultivate relationships. God bless you and I pray He helps you in the trials you are undergoing. Bethe , lucky him who has a sensitive partner like you . You can do whatever you want with it you can also add to it where I failed.... I am so much in pain today , the whole thing is silently collapsing , no empathy , no respect ... we don't talk to each other anymore , we don't even touch ... for her love is to do everything she wants , everything she desires ... and It's never enough .... Link to post Share on other sites
ShatteredLady Posted April 19, 2016 Share Posted April 19, 2016 Have you given her your poem? 2 Link to post Share on other sites
BetheButterfly Posted April 20, 2016 Share Posted April 20, 2016 Bethe , lucky him who has a sensitive partner like you . Thank you Phoenician, but I am the blessed one. (I don't believe in luck.) My husband is the best man my age on earth, in my opinion! :love: You can do whatever you want with it Thanks. What do you think of this? Maybe if... by Phoenician "Maybe if we had words to share, we would have talked. Maybe if we had a dream, We would have slept. Maybe if we had tears, we would have cried. If we had beliefs, we would have prayed. If we had stories to tell, we would have listened. If there was a road leading slowly, we would have walked. Maybe there is a moon, trees, or wooden bridge... Maybe there are too many people blocking the way... Maybe there is a way that we never see... What do you think? Is there anything you'd like to change? I am so much in pain today , the whole thing is silently collapsing , no empathy , no respect ... we don't talk to each other anymore , we don't even touch ...I am so sorry Phoenician. for her love is to do everything she wants , everything she desires ... and It's never enough .... Marriage only works when both people make it work. Do y'all have kids? Praying for you. Blessings Link to post Share on other sites
Author Phoenician Posted June 20, 2016 Author Share Posted June 20, 2016 I am tired from waiting , tired from dancing like a bird life is so dull , I wish one day I find repose in her Oh God put between us affection and mercy I am tired of all this , I am tired of waiting Link to post Share on other sites
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